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The pre writing activities I chose to do were very useful. They helped me organize my thoughts on what I am going to write about in my literacy narrative. Having your thoughts written down before you being to write an essay can be considered as an outline and are necessary before starting to write.

 

During my revision process I took into consideration the comments my classmates left of my writing. I believe it was very helpful to have constructive criticisms from multiple people in the class. Using the comments from my classmates I was able to realize what would be beneficial to my writing. The changes I made were somewhat substantial. I added more description and analysis to my writing that added a more personal touch.  I also changed commonly used words into more mature sounding words.