I chose to edit the section on appropriate word choice. This section focuses on choosing more formal and advanced words to add to the maturity of your writing. I usually choose simple commonly used words in my essay. I believe by substituting a few words in my essay with more complex words that mean the same thing I will be able to take my writing to the next level.
Example: The exam was hard.
Revision: My Anatomy teacher gave the class a challenging exam.
Hi, Emily,
I like that you are thinking about word choice as we move to final draft stage for your essay. Please revise your example, though. Your goal is to come up with your own example (not to use the book example). Do you have a sentence from your draft that might need revision for wording? Try it out in a response to this comment.
I edited my post and chose to make up an original sentence instead of using one from the book.